PITCH - INITIAL IDEA

Scene 1: First shot is of the good guy in his flat sorting out some fluff on his white shirt (a perfectionist) putting on is long trench coat (black) where he then leaves and starts to walk down stairs, half way down he stops to sort out the bottom of his suit trouser. He comes out of a front door around the centre of town where he sees a car pull up outside.

Scene 2: It cuts to 2 people talking in the car. Discussing to get the brief case that the man is carrying and if failed there will be serious consequences. Henchman gets out of the car straightens his jacket and tightens his tie and starts to follow the good guy; in the background you hear the car drive off.

Scene 3: The good guy looks back because he can hear footsteps, turns too took and no one is there cuts the henchman hiding against the wall pans across back to the guy looking back. He carries on walking but the footsteps just carry on he. Looks back again this time he catches a glimpse of the henchman and realizes he is following him so he speeds up and takes a right down buy FCUK and McDonald's.

Scene 4: Henchman carries on following around the right bend and realizes he has gone in to the church and follows him in (over shoulder shot). When he gets in the church he notices someone sitting down has the exact same briefcase and checks to see if it's the same man he was following, where he discovers it's not. He then clocks the guy sitting at the very front of the church on the seat so he walks, sly, over to him.

Scene 5: Just one massive close up of the gun, catching the detail of the finger on the trigger.

Scene 6: The church from outside where the sound effect of a bang will be played as if the gun has been fired. From this the titles will play containing the name of the piece (undecided so far) and the cast and director etc. However once these titles have finished, you see the man in the trench coat leaving the scene (church) and entering the same car that the Henchman was dropped off in to leave a massive suspicion for the rest of the film.