FEEDBACK

We discussed our pitch to the rest of the class and the teacher where we would then get ideas from them and how to improve. They mentioned it was a bit confusing however that maybe because we didn't mention everything. They also said that older actors would be a lot better than getting one of our group to act in it but if the worst comes to worst we would have to use ourselves. The gun scene where the man gets out of the car and you catch a glimpse of his gun was said to be a bit dangerous if anyone gets the wrong idea. But we got compliments on the title we have chose, 'DEAD RUNNER' and it fits well to the story of our sequence.